I like the narrowing to a single plea.
This afternoon, I wrote my post for Sunday -- and it's entitled "The Jesus Prayer." Great minds, Jim, great minds...(But you did it differently.)
I, too, like how it all comes down to a single word.Very nice.
steps ... can go either way
agreed. i have done it with varied endings and may post other versions in the future.
It is a beautiful poem and the heart-cry of every needy soul.