tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5588612230657411111.post9144201812431843273..comments2023-10-20T08:37:01.893-07:00Comments on the faithful skeptic: Concrete patchesjim schmotzerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05800123869105125286noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5588612230657411111.post-14295889105114684722009-08-21T08:37:40.084-07:002009-08-21T08:37:40.084-07:00oh , you were thinking my thoughts, that never mad...oh , you were thinking my thoughts, that never made it to poem. Our little backyard porch served as camp for pioneers in our new subdivision without fences, neighbours gathering in the dark telling tall tales of younger day plundering and portaging. <br />We moved to the green box out front for awhile.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15924061349390319473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5588612230657411111.post-21056206205988690422009-08-14T15:16:30.609-07:002009-08-14T15:16:30.609-07:00And from "the box in singular focus" we ...And from "the box in singular focus" we move to the handheld. <br /><br />Like this. A lot.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5588612230657411111.post-71931348576903344082009-08-14T11:15:57.559-07:002009-08-14T11:15:57.559-07:00"We moved to subdivisions and tract homes
Wit..."We moved to subdivisions and tract homes<br />With ordered, efficient expectations"<br /><br />I like that idea of efficient expectations, kind of want to hear more about thatAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17053877099226180289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5588612230657411111.post-59768364203314647192009-08-14T10:53:21.580-07:002009-08-14T10:53:21.580-07:00Jim, I'm so thankful for your giftedness. This...Jim, I'm so thankful for your giftedness. This is one of my favorites and reflects so well the path of our culture. Thank you!Mikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17257656369811419822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5588612230657411111.post-59463299829618848052009-08-14T10:32:21.122-07:002009-08-14T10:32:21.122-07:00I know it sounds a little odd to say this, but the...I know it sounds a little odd to say this, but the poem is a wonderful cultural commentary.<br /><br />I liked, among other things...<br /><br />"Porches became small concrete patches<br />Big enough for two or three JWs<br />To argue theology from<br />Until we shut the door in their faces"L.L. Barkathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13333960142447144678noreply@blogger.com